1st Quarter Contest

 

 

PROMPT:  A popular bakery is ransacked overnight.  The thief left everything except the secret recipe for their famous chocolate chip cookies.  

Who Stole the Cookie Recipe?

Cookie unlocked her bakery door at 4:00 a.m. sharp, as she’d done for the past twenty years. Flipping the light switch, she let out a startled cry. It looked like a cyclone had hit the kitchen.

She fished her cell phone from her purse and dialed 911.

“911. What is your emergency?”

“This is Cookie Samborini with Cookie’s Confections. Someone ransacked my business.”

“Was anything taken?”

“I don’t know. I’m just inside the kitchen door. I don’t want to risk destroying evidence.”

“I’ll send an officer.”

She was surprised by how quickly the officer arrived.

“Cookie Samborini?”

“Yes.”

“Detective Bumble. I understand there’s a problem.”

“Someone ransacked my bakery.” She pointed to the mess. “I haven’t touched anything except the doorknob and the light switch.”

“Good.” He looked around. “Anything missing?”

“I can’t tell. A lot’s been destroyed. This feels personal.”

“It looks personal. Any idea who could’ve done this?”

“No. I make sweets, nothing controversial.”

“I’m going to take pictures and dust for prints. If you’ll wait here, we’ll walk through and document losses and damages afterward.”

Wracking her brain, she couldn’t think of a single person who could’ve done this.

Lost in her thoughts, she was startled when officer Bumble touched her sleeve.

“Let’s make that list.”

Walking to her office, next to the kitchen, she picked up a notepad and pen from her desk. Everything looked normal except one desk drawer was slightly ajar.

Suspicion rose. “Did you dust for prints over here?”

“No. Do you believe it’s been tampered with?”

“Yes. I keep it locked. It was pried open.”

He photographed the drawer and surrounding area and dusted for finger prints.

Once finished, he opened the drawer. A recipe box lay on its side, contents haphazardly scattered. Dusting each card, he handed them to her for organizing.

Once the last card was in the box, she peered in the drawer. “One’s missing.”

“Are you sure?”

Anger surged. “My chocolate chip cookie recipe is gone. I ship those cookies worldwide.”

“Do you have it memorized?”

“Yes.”

“How much is it worth?”

“Priceless.”

Jotting notes, he nodded. “Let’s see what else is missing.”

Chaos reigned with flour on the floor, sugar inside the cash register, and honey coating the counters. There was no sign of forced entry. All doors and windows were locked. The safe was untouched. The only thing missing was Cookie’s recipe.

“This may be an inside job,” Detective Bumble said.

“Maybe.”

“Who else has a key to the bakery?”

“Janice and Marvin. They’ve been with me for years.”

“I’d like to stay and make some observations.”

“Sure.”

Cookie brewed coffee, posted a closed notice, and convinced her supplier to make an emergency delivery. She was sweeping when Janice arrived.

“What happened?” The woman’s lips twitched.

Cookie replied, “We were ransacked.”

“Really?” Janice giggled.

When Janice left the room, the detective asked Cookie, “She always so jolly?”

“She’s never happy.”

“I’d like to talk to her.”

“Sure.”

Janice returned to the kitchen, all smiles. “Where should I start?”

“Detective Bumble would like to talk to you.”

Her smile withered. “Why? I wasn’t here during the burglary.”

“Who said it was burglary?” asked the detective.

Janice stammered, “I assume it’s a burglary. Just look at the mess.”

“Please step over here. I have a few questions.”

“I need to help Cookie. It’s going to take hours to get the sugar out of the register.”

“How did you know about that?” asked Cookie.

Janice’s lips flattened. “You told me.”

“I didn’t.”

Sweat formed on Janice’s brow. “You must’ve.”

“She didn’t mention sugar,” the detective said.

“Are you accusing me? I don’t need a stupid chocolate chip cookie recipe.”

Nodding, Detective Bumble pulled out his handcuffs. “You’re under arrest for theft and property destruction.” He explained her rights as he cuffed her.

“Why?” Cookie cried.

Janice glared. “I work like a dog for peanuts.”

Cookie’s spine stiffened. “You’re well paid. Why steal my recipe and destroy supplies?”

“I’ve made thousands of those cookies. I deserve the money.”

“It pays your salary.” Cookie sighed. “You’re fired.”

“She won’t need a job for a while. Just a lawyer,” the detective said before escorting Janice away.

Mavin came in and helped clean. They were leaving when the phone rang.

“It’s Detective Bumble. We obtained a search warrant for Janice’s house and found your recipe. It’s evidence, but we’ll return it to you after the trial.”

“Thanks.”

“My pleasure. I’ll be by tomorrow for a chocolate chip cookie.”

“I’ll have a fresh batch.”




2.  Prompt: A puzzle maker vanishes, leaving behind an intricate locked box said to contain all his greatest designs and secrets.  Can you solve the puzzle and find the key? 

The Puzzle-Maker’s Bequest

 Violet fiddled her key into the lock of the antique wood-framed door of the shop. Finally, after much jiggling, the lock gave way, and the hinges squeaked as the door opened. 

 “Ollie!” Violet yelled into the darkness as she stepped across the threshold. She stopped for a moment, looking around, but she saw no lights and heard no sounds.

 “Well, that’s strange,” she thought to herself. “Uncle Ollie?” she said again, although this time it sounded more like a question.

 Carefully, in the darkness, she moved to the right of the door and fumbled for the light switch. Hanging from the ceiling, four old lights with dusty glass globes bathed the store's interior in pale yellow light. Wooden toys, board games in boxes, and various books filled the shelves along the walls.

 Nothing looked out of place, though she knew Uncle Ollie would not have just closed up shop on a Tuesday without telling her. They both looked forward to Tuesday afternoons when Violet would stop by. She had no classes at the college and would bring homemade soup for them both. Uncle Ollie would always close up shop early so they could have “a proper visit,” as he called it. They would talk of books, and he would show her his latest carved puzzle boxes. So, where was Ollie?

 Violet began to look around the store for some clues when she noticed a box wrapped in brown paper. On the brown paper, in Uncle Ollie’s messy handwriting, was written simply “for Violet.”  Confused by her uncle’s absence and the strange package, she began to tear the paper away. Underneath was a plain wooden box. Opening the lid, the felt-lined box contained only four simple items: a candle, a book of matches, an old worn pocket watch, and a page torn from a book.

 “Puzzles, always puzzles,” she said out loud in exasperation. Reaching into the box, she set the candle upright on the counter and pulled out an old watch. Placing the watch to her ear, she listened. Nothing. She began to wind the watch but discovered the knob was spinning freely. “Broken.”

 Violet took out the torn page to look at next. She was not sure what book this had been torn from, but she quickly saw the part intended for her. Halfway down the page was an underlined section.

 patience and time, will reveal all.

 Violet laid the three items – four, including the matches – on the counter. Why was he leaving her clues, and why wasn’t he waiting for her today? She knew the answers were in the clues, so no sense in wasting time.

 The first was easy: the candle and the matches. So, she struck one of the matches and lit the candle. She waited, but nothing.

 Next, she looked again at the old pocket timepiece. Nothing was etched on it, it was old, brass, and beginning to corrode. She opened the back cover, but the mechanisms were frozen from age.  Nothing there. Flipping it back over, she noticed the time. The watch had stopped at 4:21- Four-twenty-one in the morning or afternoon, she wondered. “Four two, one…could those numbers mean something? Four hundred and twenty-one? Four plus two plus one would equal seven.”  

 While her mind continued to work out the meaning of 4:21, she noticed that the candle looked different. Where the wick was burning, she could see a piece of metal starting to appear. She waited impatiently as the candle burned. “Of course…patience,” she said out loud, smiling and proud of herself. As she waited, the top of a key began to emerge. Violet blew out the candle and pulled the rest of the key from the soft wax. Across the top of the key were the words First National Bank, and down one side was written “Do Not Duplicate.”

 “A safety deposit box key! That bank is just down the road, but how will I know what box? There is no number on the key. Of course, she thought, 421 – patience and time reveal all.”

Violet locked the shop quickly and headed for the bank. The clerk escorted her to the back, where she located number 421. The key worked! Carefully, she pulled out a small box and a yellowed newspaper clipping. The clipping was from August 6, 1962, and was headlined “Spector Diamond Missing - Police Baffled.”

 Violet looked at the small wooden box. “No, it couldn’t be. Could it?” she stammered out loud.


    3  Prompt: Exploring a cave as a scout, you stumble upon a native burial site and ancient petroglyphs depicting strange rituals. Days later, town residents start sleepwalking into the hills.


Lisa parked in front of her father’s house. She sat in her car a bit to let the dust cloud from the dirt road to settle some before lifting her door up. After a couple of minutes, he cautiously opened his front door, a rifle in one hand and the collar of his dog in the other.

      “Dad!” she said.

      He nodded and leaned the rifle against the porch. “Haven’t seen you in a while.”

      “I thought we should talk.”

      “What’s done is done. Not really your fault, but I told you to keep them scouts out of that cave.”

      “You don’t look well,” she said.

      “Do any of us look well?”

      “I brought some things for Bobby. Bottled water and oatmeal bars he likes.”

      Her dad led the dog over to the edge of the porch and let go. The dog ran, barking excitedly. He seemed to want to say something that caused a lot of emotion to run across his face.

      Instead he said, “Don’t spend too much time with Bobby. You’re still young enough that… whatever it was about those drawings in the cave or whatever, you could still… catch it.”

      He snatched the rifle up and led her down an old deer path through the woods. Ahead of them Lisa could hear barking, it’s tone getting higher, more excited.

      Then there was the sound. The droning, low mumbling of people. Not really talking, but making a sound somewhere between a hum and a moan.              Then there was the smell. Unwashed sweat and mud, mixed with human excrement.

      In an open field were a hundred young people. What had started with Lisa leading a scout outing of teens to a cave to see ancient petroglyphs, had grown to a third of the town’s children.

      They stumbled about, their faces turned upwards, generally moving in a huge circle, making the moaning noise. Unresponsive; their arms hanging limp.

      They’d been like this over a month.

      The town had erected stanchions with flashing lights in a circle, which seemed to keep them in this now muddy depression. There were older people standing about. Watching; some crying.      

      Nearby, a woman Lisa didn’t know was shouting, “Carol!”

      Lisa felt her father behind her. “I put that hunter orange ball cap on him to keep track of him,” he said. “I got him out of town before they shot him. Damn town cops shot four or five that first day.”

      “I’ll try,” she said. She stepped forward cautiously.

      She moved in the direction they did and tried to slide into the group near Bobby. The stench was all but overwhelming. She finally got close and walked beside him, close enough to see his eyes and hear his moaning hum. His pupils were white now. He was pale and his skin looked thin. He was malnourished and dehydrated… dying.

      Hot tears came to her face but she tried to hold it together to get him to take something.

      “Bobby you have to try and eat something!” she said, her own voice hitching as she spoke. “Bobby you’ll stand out here and die if you don’t!” He took a few sips of the water, but anything else she gave him just ran down his face.

      Then as they made a lap around the field, the woman she’d seen earlier pulled a large handgun from her purse and ran into the crowd.

      “Carol!” she screamed and put the gun to a young girl’s head and pulled the trigger.

      Lisa jumped and screamed as she saw the girl collapse. Then the woman put the gun to own head. The concussion from the shot, even as far as it was, seemed to slap Lisa in the face.

      But the people moving and moaning in the field did not react at all. They stumbled over the new corpses. Some fell.

      “Lisa!” she heard her dad call. But she ignored him. She reached for and took her brother’s hand. And the low moaning hum was all she could hear. The sun seemed brighter than before, and in her bones she felt the earth send tiny sparks of magnetism up through her feet and throughout her body.

      She kicked off her shoes to walk barefoot in the sloshing mud, to feel the current, and then lifted her head. Her whole body was vibrating and… it felt good. She dropped the bag with the bottles and fruit bars.

      A low moan rose from her chest through her throat, and she let it.


4.  Train of Clues 

 Prompt: You inherit a house that belonged to your great grandfather who passed away. Inside is a complex model train set-up in the basement. Then you notice the trains seem to run on a sinister schedule

Tom carried the last of the moving boxes up the steps, through the open doorway of the huge Victorian home that once belonged to his great grandfather. He bumped the door closed with his hip and continued into the kitchen. His cell phone buzzed on the counter. His mothers face filled the screen. Tom grabbed it and swiped the green button. “Hi Mom, I just finished unloading the truck. I was about to call you.”

“Hi hon, glad you arrived safely. Is the house all that you remembered? You were around 12 or 13 years old the last time you were there.”

“I think it’s even bigger than I remembered. I appreciate Great Granddad leaving it to me. I’m not certain I can afford to heat it though. Two full stories plus an attic and a basement!”

“I know it’s huge. His wishes were very specific though. He was proud of you becoming a doctor like him and he left enough money to keep the house going.”

“I’m a medical examiner. I work on dead people. He doctored alive people. Not even close to the same but it’s nice he was proud of me.”

“Still a doctor, no point splitting hairs. We’ll talk again soon, I have to go for now. Love you!”

“Bye Mom, love you too.” 

A strange noise erupted from the basement. Tom eased the door open and found a light switch. Tom walked downstairs to investigate the “clack, clack, chugga, chugga...” wth is that noise? I hope it’s not a sign the water pipes are going to burst.

Tom walked toward the noise source. There was a very large table covered by a miniature town and a model train clanked and chugged along. Hmptf pretty cool, how’d it come on though? Tom found a set of switches, but they had no effect on the train. It kept going, then the whistle blew. It was loud and shrill for an enclosed space. Tom covered his ears. He searched and found the breaker box and flipped several electric breakers. The train didn’t stop. There was a note taped inside the door of the breaker box. It had Tom’s name on it and read:

            “Tom, you can’t turn the train off. It’s haunted.

It will help you if you allow it.

If you ignore it or try to remove it there will be problems.

Just don’t. I’m proud of you. Live well. GGD”

Tom stared at the note and train in turn. Disbelief in “unscientific things” warred with utter faith in his great granddad. The train shuddered to a stop in front of the apothecary with a hiss and a clunk. The whistle blew again. The tiny sign on the apothecary bore a caduceus on one side and skull with crossed bones on the other side. He peered at it. Ironic.

His cell vibrated with an incoming message. He glanced at the screen and muttered “okay ghost, I gotta go to work. This’ll take some getting used too. Maybe I’ve become crazy.” Tom raced up the stairs and arrived twenty minutes later at the city morgue.

Detective Lynn Moon awaited Tom. The petite brunette wasted no time on small talk. “Dr. Swanson, the young man on your exam table is the third victim in three months. I’m seeing a pattern and need your help. I hope you’re up to the task. Your predecessor was not.”

“I’ll do my best. What pattern?”

“Each month a young male with dark hair has been found dead in the downtown area. So far the causes of death are undetermined.”

“I’ll take that challenge and call you when I know something.”

Three hours later, Tom considered the possibilities while he stitched the Y incision on the torso of his subject. He didn’t want to tell Detective Moon he had no idea why the teen died. No signs of illness or trauma were detected. He’d tested for all the normal substances people overdose on and found none. Tom was flummoxed. He stored the body, locked the office and returned home.

Tom fixed a cup of coffee and dug into the box of medical books. He was determined to find an answer. The train whistled downstairs. It sounded urgent. The book Tom held was titled “Arcane Poisons of the Past.” Tom raced to the morgue to run a more detailed toxicology panel.

Hours later he called Detective Moon. “Your victim died of Aconitine poisoning.”

 

 

 

     

 

 

 

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